very coolish matman86!
the wall was a great movie! and yea that is one of the messages in this movie. basicly being your self isnt good enough to alot of people now a days. well im gald to see you enjoyed it so much. means my work was a success. any ways take care!
it's real rough & needs more work but you've made a lot of decisions in this that raises it above the average.
needs more work.
What do you mean a bckground? I did it with a camera. There is a backgound. Did you review the wrong movie or something.
good 1st effort
problem with the cop car on the fade out,
it was in a box.
hm. needs work
here are some suggestions:
- don't give out your age, it's an excuse
- plan out your projects a little more before putting them together
- frank miller buys matchbox cars as a reference. i'd do that.
- sound needs work
- take more time on the graphics
it did make me laugh, in a good way.
- do more. try harder
- need more time on the first title frame. couldn't even read it.
good build up
dead pan delivery.
just need either more or less of a pay off
looooooooong stretches of time
but use simpler images with a definite foreground/background like the pikachu pic. it will be more effective
take out the "The Ends"
good good good
shouldn't it be "Tub of Terror"?
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